My best friend, Robin, is a boy who he is tall and thin, is a person that anyone can always rely on. He's friendly and fun. He's a person that I can trust, he's always stay when I need. He likes go to the party and beach. He works and he studies hard.
I met him when he moved in front of my house. One day I was playing soccer, I saw him and told him "Do you would like play soccer and he say Yes".Since that time we are the best friend.
Well, I remember when we was in Santa Marta, we had a "good day", we was all the day at the beach, we drank beer and ate fish. When we wanted to go back to Barranquilla it was too late and we couldn't get a bus, so we had stayed there, but we didn't have enough money, we rent a very cheap hotel and we could sleep.
At this time we have a good friendship, and I hope that we continue as the best friend.
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Good composition in general Brian; however, I truly think you could have provided a lot more information. There are some mistakes (..is a boy who likes to go out so much. ... and some others) that require corrections.
ResponderEliminarwell Brian, I liked your comment, but I have to tell you that you have two mistakes. firts you used "was played" (already used it the auxiliary "was", that's past. The next verb you should use it in base form or ING), and the second mistake is "move away". In this case is "move in", because he doesn't moving far but at front of your house.
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ResponderEliminarI found a mistake in your first paragraph, you wrote " He works and studys hard", in this case is: "He works and he studies hard"
ResponderEliminarOk my friend, interesting composition. Only highlight a mistake: "When we wanted to went(past) back to Barranquilla", the right way is: "When we wanted to go(present) back to Barranquilla". God bless you my friend!
ResponderEliminarHi Brian I like your post..
ResponderEliminarIs good to have a friendship strong and I recomend you that dont doing many madness hahaha ..
good look
HI, your post was really funny :) good job, have some redact mistakes. but the most important is the history.
ResponderEliminarhi brian it is a good post about your best friend robin in general it's is interesting ,i like it,good look
ResponderEliminarhi, brian.. i see your blog and i can say that your best friend ROBIN is a person sociable and like study hard so congratulations.... GOOD BYE.
ResponderEliminargood job my Brian (O)... your best friend is a people nice!
ResponderEliminarhey brayan
ResponderEliminarmy name is Andres Gutierrez i think that you've acquired a great knowledge about English, but you have many mistakes in your composition,for example, you are talking about what? your best friend or your last vacations.